Any PR experts care to read over my press release?

[insomnia]

Hi there,

I was wondering if anyone who has experience with writing press releases would care to read over mine. Its basically about me and my buddy launching a new site, we used a youth spin on it to try and attract attention.

Please PM me if you'd like to read over it and give some tips. Its my first press release ever, so I'd love it to be perfect.

Thanks

 

[PapaStiz]

I'm no expert or claim to be, but I don't mind reading over it and helping out if I can.

Take care!

 

[insomnia]

Sent to ya! Thanks

 

[PapaStiz]

Just made my edits and replied. Good luck!