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Morning DNF. I've spent the last few weeks developing www.beards.net. The website is still evolving and content is being worked on. I would love to get your opinions! Both positives and negatives comments are welcomed.

What do you like?
What would you change?
Is it easy for you to navigate?
Does the website appear professional?

Thanks for your input!
 
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Fast loading, easy to navigate and being responsive is a HUGE plus.

Maybe a little lite on index page content for some but if your a guy surfing the web for beard ideas thats to his benefit. The white background may also seem too bland to some but have to keep im mind your target audience.

The only addition I can think of is adding the "soul patch" to the beard examples and a way to generate revenue for yourself.
 

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@Scott

I've had lots of positive feedback from friends and family but have heard multiple times that "it needs more color". Problem is I designed it to be a minimalist rendition of a digital magazine (the homepage being the magazines cover). Now I just have to man up, kill my ego and adapt :D. Which is easier said than done.

I plan on adding more content and beard styles shortly. Do you like the simple homepage? I didn't want to overwhelm new users and thought it would hurt engagement by giving too many choices.

I appreciate you taking the time to review the website and actually leaving feedback!
 
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Your welcome.

I also like minimal design and try to use it when I can. Do I like your homepage? Yes, not certain the image slider is working responsively accross all devices though.

Interestingly a few years back I surfed the web looking for beard examples for myself and there were little to no easy-in-and-out sites to view.
 

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As there isn't a great way to deal with responsive images (yet) the slider removes itself when the viewing area is deemed too small. It helps increase load times on cell phones and tablets. Do you know of a better solution?

I was also disappointed when looking for beard advice/styling guidance. Turns out Beard queries produce huge monthly searches. I'm surprised no one has stepped up to offer an authority take on the subject. Here's to hoping I can! :)
 

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Great idea awful domain name, if your going to develop than get yourself a dot com! Design very clean but requires more content on the homepage. The main pics are to large and take up to much of the screen, reduce that and add more widgets. The illustration + short descriptions is great. Adding color to it will compliment it. Your blog page is to simple, larger pictures + more widgets is crucial! Add sponsored / affiliate links to the pages and widget fields.

Dot Com is key ! Some agree and some disagree, I'm just a dot com guy!
 

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@Cure

My goal was to keep the design simple and unobtrusive to make what I do put on the page seem significant. In theory this should translate increase pageviews and hopefully increase profits from affiliate links. It'll take a bit of testing to see if it translates as I suspect.

I'd like to eventually purchase beards.com but it's currently being used by a legit business. Maybe one day I'll be able to justify the expense.

So again, the website needs color. I'll definitely start looking into my options.

Thanks for the input! I'm keeping a list of all the feedback I get so every last comment really does matter and help.
 

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- Boring theme
- Pictures too big
- Too much spaces between items
- Fonts too big on Title/Subtitle
- No Logo - No Header - No Footer

The key to develop a good site is to make it attract to the visitor. Everything should be on one page without scrolling down - They are lazy. Every pixel counts so do not leave too many empty spaces.

Just my honest opinion.
 

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- Boring theme
- Pictures too big
- Too much spaces between items
- Fonts too big on Title/Subtitle
- No Logo - No Header - No Footer

The main slider is too big or the beard examples found bellow the fold?

Could you also expand on the no logo, no header and no footer comment? I do have a header and a footer.

I prefer to use text over images where possible.. but your concern has been noted.

Thanks for your input Johnn.
 

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The main slider is too big or the beard examples found bellow the fold? Both

Could you also expand on the no logo, no header and no footer comment? I do have a header and a footer. Even you have no logo, you should make a square color box to distinct between header/body/footer.

I prefer to use text over images where possible.. but your concern has been noted. You design the site for the visitors, not for you.

Look at this site - simple and you can see clearly where the header/body/footer is
The design is not great but it is a good example of header/body/footer.
http://amcf.org/
 

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Thanks for the clarification, Johnn. I'll make note of each of your points. I appreciate the input.
 

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Alright I've adjusted the slider size. Should it still be smaller? The slider's order has also been randomized. Let me know what you guys think!
 
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Still looking for feedback. Thanks for the help!
 

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I really like the logo and the mouseover affect on the logo. I like the handsome bearded men slider on the homepage. :D

The homepage presentation is nice.

The only negative is I am confused about what the site is when I land on it. It looks like an e-commerce site but when I scroll down it starts to look like a blog. Is this a blog about beards? A community? A store? Something to clarify that right away would be great such as visual clarification or a slogan under the logo. The slider throws me off and makes me think e-commerce.
 

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I really like the logo and the mouseover affect on the logo. I like the handsome bearded men slider on the homepage. :D

The homepage presentation is nice.

The only negative is I am confused about what the site is when I land on it. It looks like an e-commerce site but when I scroll down it starts to look like a blog. Is this a blog about beards? A community? A store? Something to clarify that right away would be great such as visual clarification or a slogan under the logo. The slider throws me off and makes me think e-commerce.

You aren't the first women to notice the handsome bearded men :D

The website is in a transitional period which requires progress before more time/money is spent on development. I have heard from a few people that a slogan is needed to help users quickly understand what the website is about. Unfortunately, I'm not 100% sure if I want to open a store or monetize through affiliate sales. I'm currently doing some minor testing to see if affiliate links will profit in this niche. A bigger and much more lucrative option would be opening a specialty shop.. which has a whole bunch of obstacles.

I appreciate you taking the time to bring some value to the conversation. Your points have been recorded and will help shape the future of this site.
 

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Hi Beardy man,

I have a couple of comments if you don't mind? I was a graphic designer before I got involved in the internet and had to learn to do everything so I can point out a couple of things.

I hate to say it but I pretty much agree with the other posters. I believe the minimalist idea isn't working here.... There is overall too much grey which makes the site a bit morose. You could possibly add a bit of colour into the background which will bring the white page out more. If you use even a vibrant colour the page will jump out and be much more pleasant to view. In my humble opinion a yellow ochre would work well with the blue question mark circles. Not quite orange but bright all the same. Not a dull muddy colour which would have the opposite effect!

Another thing that came to mind was the overall ease of navigation. Even if you don't want to directly sell to the visitor there still needs to be an easy and logical path through the website with a call to action on every page. From the homepage all the way through there doesn't seem to be a clear direction and I think you as the webmaster has to be more forceful, if you like, at leading them through. Then the 'ask a question' box and tags pop up with no clear reason why. Maybe some clever copyrighting and headlining here could solve this problem? The 'ask a question' box may well get a 'WTF am I doing here' written in if you're not careful! - if you're lucky... Maybe instead of 'ask a question' you could have 'what's the coolest thing about beards'? or have a poll about the best way to get a snog without giving the poor girl a rash? Sorry to be flippant but internet audiences are fickle these days and if you don't entertain 'em, you'll lose 'em.

Of course when the 'ask a question' box came up I put in the obvious question - 'Do women like beards' lmao - Guess what? it wasn't answered! lol

We all know that the only reason men even bother about washing their face in the morning is because they might bump into a latino cleaning lady on the stairs and suddenly be caught up in a home made porno. I know this happens to me all the time. :) You need to address this I think. One easy way would be to stick a photo of David Beckham and a beardy Will Smith in the first page montage!

Which leads me to something else....lol sorry about all this. You can email bomb me if you like for revenge. I think all your colour photo's need to have the men smiling in them. It's just too mean and moody. Also, I'd have Kelly Brook and Megan Fox hanging all over them. You need some women in there man to try and avoid the gay fitness mag look. Maybe have some beardy guys kicking the living shit out of some unfortunate clean shaven freak (English if possible) ....Of course the beardy guys will be smiling while this is happening with a big dog on a leash and some female porn stars standing around in their underwear. Maybe too much but you get my point I hope. Entertain them and make them laugh and they'll stay.

I'm Scottish so I would mind seeing a bearded hunk o burning love in a kilt.......with a big sword. Cripes...

I think the drawings of different kind of beards under the fold is a great idea but the actual pictures you've used MUST be the actual mugshots of Jack the Ripper! The are VERY creepy and I think you need to COMPLETELY rethink this here. This man is exactly the kind of criminal that hangs around on the deep web. Oh hang on a minute.....that's me. These photos need to be redone and some interest created more than just changing their beard styles. I would keep them black and white maybe but have some actual example photos of real people from different angles. You can find any sort of facial hair photos from local barbers and hairdressers. Also, keep the photos of relatively young guys. The one of your dad in the living room, painting the ceiling I don't think will impress your target audience.....unless you're targeting the village people or poofs that idolised Police Academy 3.....or 4.

Anyway, I hope you don't take offence at this because I think it is a great and original idea so best get it right as soon as possible before you go giving your money to Google Adwords. I have honestly no idea about how you're going to monetize this site but what the **** do I know about that? I've been at it for ages now and I think the only cash I've made has been from my clickbank purchases through my own affilliate links.

Anyway, if your ego can cope please pm me when it's finished so I can have another gander,

Chris :)

Oh and PS - that reminds me.....take out the swearing on that site. It's totally inappropriate. lol

PPS If anybody wants me to write an article for their website I always need the cash. ;-)
 
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You know the more I think about it, the more I think a 'famous beardy gallery' would be a good idea.

You could have pictures of Sean Connery, Snoop Dogg and Oprah Winfrey.
 

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It sounds like most of your comments are for the live version. The attached pictures are of the proposed redesign. Overall your response was gold. Thank you for taking the time our to review it. I'm going to shoot you a pm within the next week.


This is the most current jpeg of the proposed redesign.
View attachment BeardsHOME14 (1).jpg
 
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Yep Beardy, that looks much better mate. Very much cleaner and crisper. Of course the page fold position will obviously make it look different which means the bottom half of the page might still be a little dull but that looks much better. :) By the way, I've been dreaming about beards and I believe I may have a proposition for you. I bought a domain and am building a website and writing some copy right now and I believe we may be able to cooperate on a project! Hit me up and we'll see, Chris.
 
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