Review my web design work please

[tldrental]

Please review my outdoor movie rental website. I have worked on it for two nights and I think I have the foundation laid. What do you think? I still have to dial in the text content and seo.

Google search "Fun" <=00 0 000 0 000 00=> "Flicks" <== put those two words together for a google or slap a ".com" to the end and you will see the website am targeting. Do you think my outdoor movies has a better appeal to the consumer?

 

[tldrental]

I guess I am a professional web designer now... 71 views and no bad feedback, so I assume no feedback is good feedback... ?

 

[David G]

I guess I am a professional web designer now... 71 views and no bad feedback, so I assume no feedback is good feedback... ?

I like your new site.

P.S. right, it's tough to get feedback from the forrums anymore compared to several years ago when it was so easy to do (except now for non-important or non-domaining subjects where there may be too much feedback).

 

[stephenlamc]

The screen shots of the videos on the main page are not clear and out of focus. I suggest to have shots with the inflatable movie stands to relate to your main theme. The fonts of the titles in the widgets are not my personal taste. Sorry, I am not a professional web designer that those are my observations at this moment.

 

[Theo]

I like the pool.

 

[tldrental]

I like the pool.

Yeah that is a sweat picture, that was taken at the taping of the MAN Caves tv show backyard bar and grill episode which airs this spring time. .. and I like this one as well http://inflatabledrivein.com/wp-content/themes/shopperpress/thumbs/hoa-outdoor-movie-rental.jpg super cool with the Christmas tree in the background....

Well I usually value my time wisely and pay the professionals to do what they do best. I found some inspiration in starting this design and went with it. I really dont have time to do stuff like this. I put this together in about 24 hours +/- between last Friday and today. I want to mimic the "fun" .- - - - - - "flicks" model with this website.. I dont want to give them any juice direct linking but google the quotes together... how do you think this mine compares?


I agree about he videos... more or less place holders for the moment until I replace with better quality video... I am of the belief that raw video is better then now video... just me though. Great feedback guys... and thanks!

I am using wordpress... so I will play with the CSS to make it stand out more... thanks again... keep it coming if anyone else has something to say.


Thanks!